The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
It is often argued that people’s
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qualities will decrease.
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, a growing body of studies reported that individuals experience more stress than in the past due to Linking Words
lifestyle
changes. People have to work longer hours to earn enough money for their daily living costs. Use synonyms
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increased workload, complicated work tasks, and limited social interactions. Change preposition
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as anxiety disorders, depression have shown an upward trend during recent years. Linking Words
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, a recent study has shown that human beings with anxiety disorders sharply increased more than doubled in 2020. Linking Words
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health
are affected by mental problems.
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, life expectations are significantly increased, chronic illnesses experience an upward trend. Lots of individuals suffer from various kinds of chronic conditions including cancer, diabetes, etc. The advancement in technology makes it possible to offer new treatments which slightly improve the average life expectancy. Linking Words
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lifestyle
of society has been changed a lot when compared to the past. Use synonyms
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, body functions are affected badly. Linking Words
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, now, people prefer to eat fast food, while they used to eat fresh foods in the past. Linking Words
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lifestyle
and it will probably have negative impacts on generations.
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changes and chronic disease well-being. Use synonyms
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