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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

#people #school #children #homework #teachers #role #education
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People have different views about the
homework
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 tasks to pupils. While I understand that the teachers should not give an assignment to
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children
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, I believe that
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 has a key role on
children
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. There are several reasons why people might argue that schools ought not to give an assignment.
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 may put pressure on
students
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 to manage their schedule and finish given tasks.
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, they can feel stress and be stuck in it.
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, they do not have enough time for leisure activities due to long
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 hours.
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,
children
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 have a lack
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social
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, and they are growing up as a robot.
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, they should be more encouraged about sports activities rather than many
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 tasks.
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, many
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 are not part of any physical activity because of the busy
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 curriculum in Turkey. In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that an assignment should be given to
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. The main benefit of
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 is that their sense of responsibility will develop day by day, and it will help them with adult
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 requirements
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 as paying bills and group work in a job.
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,
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 have only to study.
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, their job is
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.
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, if
children
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 do not receive
homework
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, they might spend many times on television, video games and mobile phone. In my opinion, their focus should be only on
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. When I was a student, my teacher gave me lots of to do even in the summer holidays and I spent most of my time finishing my job.
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, I am thankful to my teachers because
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 made me a responsible person in adult
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. In conclusion,
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 given
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 certainly has drawbacks, I believe that the benefits of
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 outweigh them in the long term. It will be helpful for their future
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 when they grow up.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Instills discipline
  • Deepen understanding
  • Independent learning
  • Reinforcement
  • Parental involvement
  • Curriculum insight
  • Burnout
  • Student stress
  • Leisure time
  • Relevance of assignments
  • Project-based learning
  • Interactive learning
  • Individual learning styles
  • Conducive study environment
  • Homework policy
  • Balanced approach
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