some people think government is responisble for looking after the elderly, others beleive that it should be family members. Who do you think should take responsibilty?
Young
people
have so many necessities in school life and they need some free time to feel relaxed. Nowadays, shopping is the most preferred activity rather than sports and playing instruments for leisure activities
. In my opinion, young people
could train to find more beneficial activities
.
There are many reasons why shopping is the most
favourite activity among teenagers. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Firstly
, online shopping has substituted shopping in stores day by day with the increasing use of credit cards. In addition
, teenagers have the chance to shop without going to the stores and also
they could return the product that they purchased. Secondly
, people
at young ages tend to describe themselves only with their appearances. The outfit is an important part of this
description especially with the fact that social media has a great influence on our life. As a result
, So many teenagers want to be admired for their fashionable clothes and looks. If they want to be fashionable and admirable, they have to go shopping frequently. Lastly
, young people
have a problem with emotional regülation with the effect of unstable hormones. When they experience an adverse life event, they need to distance the negative emotions and shopping lends assistance to do so.
Nevertheless
, young people
are not successful in planning helpful activities
and making logical decisions, they tend to be impulsive and also
choose easy ways. They could be guided for this
by parents and teachers. They could do sports like basketball, football and tennis. In addition
, they could make a hobby like playing instruments and painting. They could spend their time doing more beneficial activities
instead
of shopping.
In conclusion, young people
use shopping for leisure time activities
. The reasons for this
are the spread of online shopping, using shopping for emotion regülation strategy and feeling of being found desirable. In my opinion, young people
could do more helpful activities
like exercise and doing a hobby beside
shopping.Correct your spelling
besides
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