Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment, why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Re-committing offence by a culprit who has completed punishment for other fugitive inclined nowadays.How it can be possible?the core reason for
this
trend is a denial of society, it is certain that,
people could not accept culprits as normal social beings like them.Remove the comma
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Moreover
,this
attitude forces them to do more wrong things in future even after their punishment in jail
.This
essay will enunciate the main causes and how we can reduce this
in detail with appropriate examples.
To commence with, it is undeniable that society could not accept wrongdoers and this
situation make them alone in public as well as could not get decent jobs as normal social beings.Moreover
, this
rejection inspires them to commit the offence again and again for their survival.Subsequently
, our Government can not tolerate them in jail
in the case of recurrence.For instance
, The Hindu newspaper published important news last
week about re-committing offences by criminals in Kerala that needs a solution.The officialdom does not have many funds to afford criminals in jail
in the case of recurrent crime.In addition
, the leading party suggested that society have to pay a small amount to run jails.
However
,The Government can not curtail crime, rehabilitation
and in jail
campus paid jobs can change
criminals from wrong things because they are attempting offences for getting paid.Furthermore
,rehabilitation
moulds them to become normal beings and they can easily get paid for a decent job.For example
, In Kerala has been providing rehabilitation
services to jail
inmates in viyyur central jail
to change
them in a positive manner.In addition
to running a small food court in jail
compound which helps them to get paid for their food items.
In conclusion, there is a chance to improve and change
offenders life in jail
to avoid repeating crimes in the future such
as rehabilitation
services and training.In my ,opinion this
will change
them from following their old life.Submitted by mariyatresavarghese on
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