Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment, why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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Re-committing offence by a culprit who has completed punishment for other fugitive inclined nowadays.How it can be possible?the core reason for

this

trend is a denial of society, it is certain that

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people could not accept culprits as normal social beings like them.

Moreover

this

attitude forces them to do more wrong things in future even after their punishment in

jail

This

essay will enunciate the main causes and how we can reduce

this

in detail with appropriate examples. To commence with, it is undeniable that society could not accept wrongdoers and

this

situation make them alone in public as well as could not get decent jobs as normal social beings.

Moreover

this

rejection inspires them to commit the offence again and again for their survival.

Subsequently

, our Government can not tolerate them in

jail

in the case of recurrence.

For instance

, The Hindu newspaper published important news

last

week about re-committing offences by criminals in Kerala that needs a solution.The officialdom does not have many funds to afford criminals in

jail

in the case of recurrent crime.

In addition

, the leading party suggested that society have to pay a small amount to run jails.

However

,The Government can not curtail crime,

rehabilitation

and in

jail

campus paid jobs can

change

criminals from wrong things because they are attempting offences for getting paid.

Furthermore

rehabilitation

moulds them to become normal beings and they can easily get paid for a decent job.

For example

, In Kerala has been providing

rehabilitation

services to

jail

inmates in viyyur central

jail

change

them in a positive manner.

In addition

to running a small food court in

jail

compound which helps them to get paid for their food items. In conclusion, there is a chance to improve and

change

offenders life in

jail

to avoid repeating crimes in the future

such

rehabilitation

services and training.In my ,opinion

this

will

change

them from following their old life.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment, why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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