Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #attention

There are

people

who believe that today’s habit of purchasing things is persuaded successfully by the

whereas others think the

is ordinary so the attention will be less paid to. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in

this

essay.

To begin

with, technology has always been developed including the new tactics of marketing on online platforms these days.

For instance

, the majority of social network applications start to collect personal data from the users which involve texts and website searching history.

Then

, Those who work behind the apps will research what will users are likely to think about at the moment and put the promotion on the website. Because of

this

, most

people

tend to pay their money for the products that are promoted.

On the other hand

, some

people

find the

is too typical, especially the old way of marketing.

For example

people

may not be interested in the promotion on TV anymore since there are many online movies and series streaming platforms. The payment of those platforms is required in exchange for removing the

Therefore

people

may not be attracted to the old-fashioned way of commercials on TV. To summarise, the two sides of the argument concerning the existence of advertising have strong support.

However

, after a thorough analysis of both sides, it is clear that the

second

idea of the commercial cannot be supported. Nowadays

people

access the internet through many sites and applications

which

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for which

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they have no permission to remove those promotions.

Thus

, the possibility of paying for things by online commercial is obviously high. In my opinion, I disagree with the

second

statement.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

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persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
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saturated
overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
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