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In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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After being qualified and being employed, many adults prefer to live with their
parents
. It is a common trend seen in some nations.
This
 is advantageous in terms of mutual benefits of a joint family and it
also
 provides a sense of belonging to the same family tree; whereas,
this
 is definitely expensive and may result in some disputes. Despite
of
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these minor drawbacks, its advantages take precedence over its detriments. Living with
parents
 in practical life is extremely beneficial for both
parents
 and their grownups. People can leave their children with their grandparents when they go
for
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 work.
This
 is good for the proper development of their young ones as they are
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 hands and they can spend quality time with their grandparents.
Similarly
,
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 do not feel alone and isolated. They enjoy their old age being a part of their family because they are not left at the mercy of care homes.
Secondly
, when three or four generations of
same
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 family live together, it helps them
enjoying
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 a sense of belonging to
same
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 roots which
nurtures
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 unity.
On the other hand
,
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common accommodation costs more because a family has to afford a big house. With the increasing inflation in the contemporary era,
affordability
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 level has dropped.
Consequently
, it is difficult to live with
parents
 when people have their own families.
Moreover
, when families extend and all people live together, there are some points at which it is not possible for everyone to agree on the same idea because all have
different
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mindset
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.
As a result
, misunderstandings can lead to
quarrel
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 in families. In conclusion, it is mutually beneficial for both
parents
 and their adult children when they settle together and they feel good that they all have
same
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 family roots.
Although
,
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this
 trend can be costly and may cause disruptions in a family, its advantages overshadow its disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cohabitation
  • intergenerational living
  • self-sufficiency
  • financial stability
  • maturation
  • dependency
  • socio-economic factors
  • familial dynamics
  • personal autonomy
  • housing affordability
  • cultural expectations
  • life trajectory
  • emotional resilience
  • nuclear family
  • joint family system
  • economic prudence
  • privacy concerns
  • social stigma
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