Some think that computer games are dangerous for children in every way, while others think that computer games help children’s development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Over the
last
two or three decades, technology has been developing tremendously than ever before, especially in
computer
games
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quite popular
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the world, especially in
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.
However
, some believe that
computer
games
are given an adverse effect
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children in every method while
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others say
that
this
kind of game provides numerous assist for infant's improvement.
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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand,
computer
games
are hazardous to
childeren's
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children's
life since in
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childhood
period because they can influence in a negative way due to offsprings not the mature,
therefore
, they believe
everthing
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everything
whether right or wrong and they never analysis.
For example
, PUBG and FREE FIRE,
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were designed for only pre-teens,
therefore
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and India has a mental hospital for PUBG players. To be more precise, countless
games
are designed for attracting only the pre-teens,
therefore
, they might be addicted to playing online
games
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basis.
Therefore
, these kinds of
games
always give toxic
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in every way.
On the other hand
,
computer
games
can develop children's thinking
process
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as well as knowledge too.
For instance
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 30% of the pre-teens design
computer
games
and programs
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they play every time while they get
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more ideas from
this
. When a child plays video
games
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while he thinks logically
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to solve
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using knowledge,
therefore
, wisdom can be improved.
Hence
,
this
video game can improve
child's
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brain activity To conclude, playing video
games
is quite popular among
the
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infants.
This
certainly, provides a multitude of adverse
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on offspring's life and
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childhood and
childhood
this
improves
brains
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who are playing.
However
, in my opinion, about
this
, these kinds of online
games
can be given numerous toxic
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to offspring as well as dangerous too. I believe that
this
game should be banned by the ministry.
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