Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city centre with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Travelling to work is one of the hectic problems faced by the folks in the city. To overcome

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some pupils suggest demolishing gardens and public parks and creat accommodation

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for the people so that the time is managed well. In the

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,essay I will discuss both views and will give my own opinion at the end.

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, Pointing out the parks and other

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provided by the government has its own need and purpose in the society in order to satisfy the office crowd and make their life easy it not a correct step to tackle

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by converting

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infrastructure into accommodation

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recent ,year we have faced many issues when we went against nature for our convenience and the results are hazardous. So in order to make working people life easy there can be many things done

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providing free shuttle services from a particular area to the workplace.

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might save a lot of money and will

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be an eco-friendly step to save nature for our upcoming generation.

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, It is true that people in the urban areas suffer and waste a lot of money and time reaching to their workplace from their houses the reason being all the offices are in the downtown area of the city, whereas the commercial apartments are far from these areas.So substituting playgrounds and gardens into housing societies will solve the

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to some extent but may not solve the entire

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where children or the senior citizens can spend there might be a huge possibility where they might suffer from different kinds of health-related issues

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as lack of fresh air, no dedicated plays where children can play and make friends. To put it in a nutshell, in my ,opinion to solve a

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we should not create another , Rather think of

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a solution where the

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can be eliminated from its root. So I personally feel the destruction of refreshing

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and creating a place for living is not a good idea.