Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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decades, the

number

of

people

who reside in urban

areas

has been on a rise and

therefore

, one of their pivotal requirements that ought to be provided is housing.

However

, most

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argue that preserving

out

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nature

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resources and planting more

trees

are

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more of a value and providing and building accommodation for

people

should the

second

priority in urbanizing. While

this

essay agrees with the above notion it

suggest

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that planting

trees

has

direct

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impact

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standard

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of living which ought not to be sacrificed by more skyscrapers.

To begin

with, it is an undeniable fact that due to industrialization in cities

people

reside from rural to urban

areas

,

thus

, urban

areas

that were used to be surrounded by

trees

and vegetation has undergone considerable changes by human constructions.

Subsequently

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trees

have been cut.

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the important matter that humans have

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need to be connected with

nature

has been underestimated. These changes can result in a phenomenon called urban heat island which means solid materials as buildings absorb more heat from

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and raise the temperature of the city’s 5 or 6 degrees more than lands in rural parts. If some regulations be set with the approach of planting more

trees

,

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and

spread

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the local greens, the crisis of climate would be tackled to some extent.

Additionally

, due to

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of enough

nature

communities are suffering,

hence

, living standards in urban

areas

has been worsen.

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research in environment organization of UK over the different regions of

this

city conducted that those who reside on cites with more

trees

and other green elements were feeling more mentally

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opposed to those who lack

this

point in their

neighbor

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were having more mental pressure.

Hence

, green spaces are necessary for

people

well-being. To conclude, the urgent

needs

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for housing for accommodating

large

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a large

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number

of

people

has resulted in demolishing

nature

cites

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and being harsh to our environment.

Although

, unless there

are

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adequate

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number

of

trees

in where we live and

considerable

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a considerable

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number

of landscapes

such

as parks, one of humans

desire

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which is

connection

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with

nature

wouldn’t be achieved.