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Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Introduction
The given line graph describes information about the recycling rates for different four
materials
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 namely paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics in a nation between 1982 and 2010, units are measured in per
cent
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.
Body paragraph 1
Overall, it can be seen that clearly, paper and cardboard was the major higher recycling
materials
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 than plastics during the given periods.
Body paragraph 2
According to the graph illustrates, paper and cardboard were accounted for recycling in the initial period, with an average of 65 per
cent
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,
this
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 figure fluctuated from 1986 to 1994, which is 80%. From 1994 to 2010, there was a significant decrease and reached final year 60 per
cent
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. In terms of glass containers were compounded in 50% of the recycling
materials
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, after that eight years later,
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 figure fluctuated from 1990 to 1994 and there was a gradual increase and reached the final year just 60 per
cent
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.
Conclusion
In terms of Aluminium cans, from 1982 to 2002, the recycling rate grew significantly from 4 to 22 per
cent
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.
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 reached the end of the year just 35%.
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, plastic recycling was started in 1990, with an average of 3 per
cent
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then
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this
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 was increased gradually, which is 6%. between 1994 and 2010, there was a marginal rise in recycling
materials
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 from 5 to 9 per
cent
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.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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