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Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar chart describes information about the different five
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 groups of the
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 from 1990 to 2020 in
Iceland
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, units are measured in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that clearly, 25-54
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group
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 has the major higher
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 during the all given period. According to the graph illustrates, in 1990, 25-54
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group
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 had the highest
population
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 in
Iceland
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, with an average of 32 per cent, that one decade later,
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 figure was increased slightly by 3% and From 2010 to 2020,
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 has increased gradually from 38 to 48%. In terms of 0-14
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 had 28 per cent in the initial period, after one decade,
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 figure was reduced slightly, with an average of 26%. From 2010 to 2020, there was a gradual fall in the
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 of
Iceland
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 from 22 to 18 per cent.
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, the 15-24
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 were accounted for 21% in the initial period, but after the following three decades,
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 figure was decreased significantly and reached the final year 8%. 65 and over the
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 of the
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 in
Iceland
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 were compounded by just 12% while 55-64 had 13%. In 2010, these both
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 groups fell and rose slightly, with an average of 13 and 115 respectively.
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