Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Schooling programs has always been a highly arguable issue. Society and parents always are demanding new
projects
in the curriculum for young adolescents. Sometimes this
idea works, and sometimes it doesn’t. In my opinion, unpaid community service as a program is going nowhere.
First
, the core of unpaid service is defined by voluntary work, and when schools
force children to do it, it may ruin the concept of this
work. Students
must feel their own free will, aside from this
issue, if schools
want to start this
program, they should have a class for it to teach the essential concepts of unpaid social projects
which are understood to think and help people and avoid to egocentric therefore
like sports class, schools
should be prepared students
before beginning it. It seems fair to say that, today, schools
are becoming more and more demanding; students
should spend a lot of time doing their work; therefore
, it is frustrating for them to do these projects
after school when they want to be for themselves. If unpaid services were a part of the school’s classes, it would be great for students
.
Second
, teens tend to disobey; hence
, when schools
oblige them to perform unpaid service, it may grow resentment because they see it as a duty. In my opinion, schools
should be careful about these projects
. They intelligently motivate children. For example
, schools
can encourage students
by giving them some benefits that boost their confidence. In many respects, if the students
don’t understand why they should do these services, they feel worse, and its negative effect stays for years.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of these projects
outweigh the advantages, and society should start these projects
in other places.Submitted by shirin.khosronejad on
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