Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that the financial

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provided by developed

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for the developing

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does not solve

poverty

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the poverty

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issue. Henceforth, developed

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should seek

alternative

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way

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to help developing

nations

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instead

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of financial

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. Given the circumstances, I definitely agree with the previous statement because the advantages, of various

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of solely financial

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, outweigh the disadvantages.

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and foremost

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developed

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could provide teachers for free to the poor

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in order to improve their

education

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system.

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is a powerful tool and could create a strong foundation in order for the

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to successfully

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and governing a

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.

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,

singapore

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Singapore

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was once a poor

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and now has

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a powerful

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due to the help of

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in providing a better

education

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system.

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, rich

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could offer

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opportunity

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opportunities

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for poor

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. By establishing

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agreement

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between each other, poor

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could have the opportunity to boost their

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activity and

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create jobs for their people.

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, Japan was once a poor

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and they have been given the chance to sell their products

at

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in

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the United States and now the two

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have been benefited

by

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from

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the

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activities. Financial

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is essential, but that does not mean it is the only possible way to solve poverty as there are many ways to provide

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for

the

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developing

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. It is way better for advanced

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provide

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education

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system improvement

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and

trade

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opportunity as it has been proven.

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, it is better to provide

other type

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of

aids

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aid

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instead

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of financial

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only.