Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. ??

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Nowadays,
animals
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and
plants
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are drastically decreasing because of
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human actions.these are very important
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the planet,so In my view,authorities should take strict actions to protect
plants
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from
the
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human beings,but citizens think that it is too late to put restrictions as
people
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are habituated to cut
plants
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as well as kill
animals
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.while others think that we should protect them.
this
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essay will discuss both views.
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with,the main reason for cutting the herbs which occupy more place to grow,
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people
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decided to remove the plant.the benefit of planting
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a plant
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plant
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plants
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is not only
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an
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oxygen to us but
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provides
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shed
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to all
people
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.
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,
plants
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brings
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attraction to
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.
for instance
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,In some places
people
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health conditions are bad due to
shortage
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of oxygen.if they planted herbs,they would have
good
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life.in order to overcome these issues,
government
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the government
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put restrictions like
collect
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money as
penalty
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a penalty
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from
people
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who try to cut the
plants
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. On another side,some
animals
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play a crucial role in someone's life like dogs,cows.these days ,humans are
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to consume
meat
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.
therefore
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,
animals
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are deteriorating day by day.
although
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animals
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are very close to nature,
people
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killed them without hesitation.at
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time ,
people
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are adopting
animals
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as pets .because they
are protect
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are protected
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from theifs
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they show affection towards
people
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,
therefore
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authority
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authorities
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should ban
meat
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as a result
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people
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are stop
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consuming
meat
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.
for example
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,according to
survey
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the survey
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,
population
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the population
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of consuming
meat
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is more than fruits,Especially
in
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festival days. To conclude,it is our responsibility to protect the herbs and
animals
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.we should try to give them importance.everyone should save
plants
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by pouring water every day,
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we should
also
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treat
animals
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as our friends.in
this
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way the issue can be reduced.
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