It is argued that university student should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects? To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Over the
last
two or three decades, students enrolling have been raising tremendously than ever before due to the employment opportunities.
However
, some think that university students should be studied all subjects rather than choosing some specific subjects. I strongly disagree with
this
statement and
this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, learners should not study a full range of subjects because whatever they like and they have numerous interest that accountable they have to choose for their higher studies,
therefore
, they can be the particular
subject
specialist.
For example
,
in
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India has
a
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plenty of degree courses
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their citizens who are finished secondary school level and they should choose any one particular accountable for their higher studies purpose,
therefore
, they can learn innumerable wisdom free
this
.
In addition
, if a pupil can learn any particular course, it would be
choosen
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chosen
choosing
choose
a career line in future,
therefore
, students should not be studied all
subject
in their higher education.
Furthermore
,
whole
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subject
can be a plethora of confusion towards studying whether which
subject
is most crucial or less crucial,
hence
, universities can give
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clear guidance to the enlistment.
For instance
, a recent report by the London Times said that more than 20000 medical
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are finished to their MBBS course in Asian countries
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each year, these nations teach only medical practice for MBBS pupils
instead
of
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subject
because
other
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subject
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us for
this
person.
In addition
, when a person who
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enrolled
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higher studies, he should be learnt a particular interest as well as employment opportunities way. To conclude, scholars, should not be learned a full range of lessons because they have to choose what they like and have numerous
interest
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;
this
can be confused to scholars when they will study
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whole
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,
therefore
,I strongly disagree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope
this
process is conducive to building
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educational society.
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