You are studying at a college which has very limited sports and leisure facilities for students. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter; outline the situation propose ways to improve this situation request a meeting to discuss this Begin your letter 'Dear "Do not write any addresses”

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In the present ,situation college is not having the number of

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which can give us the opportunity to showcase our true potential in

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, to create consistent effort there is a lack of infrastructure to improve the

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year in the general championship, we were competing with 20 colleges in 10

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. We were short of a few margins in some tournaments. It would have been a complete one-sided win in our strong

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which are cricket, football, kabaddi,swimming, table tennis and chess. At the present level, we do have a swimming pool but without proper maintenance, lack of cricket equipment, and

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with no fitness centre like a gym.

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, we still managed to win 3rd prize in the chess and cricket tournament ,by managing it from external resources. For making an exponential jump in all

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and creating a name of the college brand we need your support in improving the current facilities of

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. Our suggestion is to create a gym in college with paid membership for students and free for

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students who are qualified for participating in students. So, it is a sincere request to give your support in the development of an ecosystem related to

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that can enhance numerous

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and facilities required for improving the scale.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

218 words

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You are studying at a college which has very limited sports and leisure facilities for students. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter; outline the situation propose ways to improve this situation request a meeting to discuss this Begin your letter 'Dear "Do not write any addresses”

The Greeting

Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is this the case? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?

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