You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Smith, I am Ruchika Munjewar from Australia residing at

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am writing

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letter to inform you that

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have seen your advertisement in

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magazine regarding a babysitting

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. Since

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am planning to move to your location and

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looking for a babysitting

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which will be more

convinient

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along with my studies. Since

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am so happy-go-lucky type of person and

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used to share a special bond with the

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children

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and

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have a little experience in handling and taking care of the kids. So

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believe that

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am

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suitable candidate for

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job

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meanwhile in my leisure time,

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would like to

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in the country, I am a person who

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touched with

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nature so

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spend my time in

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Parks, watching the kangaroos, tickling the cats and

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clicking the picture of nature. Looking forward

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your positive response

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my application .

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sincerely Ruchika Munjewar