You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear
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Smith, I am Ruchika Munjewar from Australia residing at
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bridge,
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am writing
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have seen your advertisement in
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magazine regarding a babysitting
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am planning to move to your location and
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looking for a babysitting
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which will be more
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convenient
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along with my studies. Since
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am so happy-go-lucky type of person and
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used to share a special bond with the
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children
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and
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have a little experience in handling and taking care of the kids. So
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believe that
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am
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suitable candidate for
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meanwhile in my leisure time,
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would like to
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in the country, I am a person who
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touched with
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nature so
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spend my time in
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Parks, watching the kangaroos, tickling the cats and
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clicking the picture of nature. Looking forward
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your positive response
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my application .
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sincerely Ruchika Munjewar
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
  • Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
  • Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
  • Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
  • Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
  • Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment
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