You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Mr Smith, I am Ruchika Munjewar from Australia residing at Capetown bridge,I am writing

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letter to inform you that I saw your advertisement in Australian magazine regarding a babysitting post. Since I am planning to move to your location and

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looking for a babysitting job which will be more convenient for me to do the work along with my studies. Since I am so happy-go-lucky type of person I used to share a special bond with the children and

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I have a little experience in handling and taking care of the kids. So that's why I believe that I am a suitable candidate for

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position. And

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meanwhile in my leisure time, I would like to room in the country, I am a person who is really touched with nature so I'lllspend my time in the National Parks, watching the kangaroos, tickling the cats and

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clicking the picture of nature. Looking forward to your positive response to my application . Yours sincerely Ruchika Munjewar

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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