You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
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missive to let you know that I have just an article related to the 'karnal' region that you published on 21st July 2022.
I wanted you to make some corrections to your Linking Words
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Firstly
,in terms of literacy rate,Karnal has 75% of the total population who are literature while the Linking Words
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shows a much lesser number in comparison with the actual data shown by the census 2022.
I certainly believe it is vital for the organisation to display the true content because the Use synonyms
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is circulated across distinct parts of the nation and if the readers get the information that the Use synonyms
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there might be a chance that people will stop reading the Linking Words
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which will lead to huge losses for the company in the future.
Since the Use synonyms
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is already published and distributed across the country.So,to rectify the error the organization must provide a short note in their upcoming articles where it should republish the article but with correct numbers.
Do not hesitate to contact me
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully,
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.