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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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The ideal school program is not a unanimous metter. While some people believe that schools should focus on teaching
skills
, others might think that teaching a wide spectrum of
subjects
 would be the best way to go. The
next
 paragraphs intend to explain which one I consider the best considering the challenges that the future might bring to our
kids
.
Firstly
 it is important that schools teach content that relates to students universe and can be applicable to everyday life. So I believe that some
subjects
 should be universally thought
.
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For example
 personal finance,
first
 aid, sex education, basic constitutional law, history and English.
In other words
, all types of content
that
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would help to build a sense of citizenship or give
kids
 the necessary tools to have a balanced adult life.
Nonetheless
, the world is changing rapidly and it is becoming more and more complicated to predict what type of knowledge will be valuable in 20 years,
for example
. So I believe that it is crucial to prepare children to live in a world that will demand constant adaptation. That being said, in my ,opinion it is better to teach them
skills
instead
 of specific
subjects
.
For example
 self-study, self-discipline, resilience,
in other words
, soft
skills
 in general. I believe
that is
 the best way to go considering that the
kids
 from today will probably have several careers during their life and will need to be constantly adapting and reinventing themselves To conclude, considering that
kids
 are going to live in a
fast paced
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 world, full of rapid changes, in my opinion having a great set of
skills
 is more useful than a variety of
subjects
. Curiosity, imagination and problem-solving
skills
 are examples of what I think is crucial.
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