Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socializing online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In our days, youth more and more prefer to chat online with each other, than face to face. In my
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of technology and it is not so good for a person. It is influenced by psychology and the inner state of a person.
Modern technology, which includes different social networks, Add an article
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as Instagram, Facebook, TikTok, Telegram and Watsapp attract, mostly young people. They can spend all their time on these networks. For them, it is more interesting, than talking to each other. Everybody prefers
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meeting. But nothing can be better, than meeting lively. I noted it during a pandemic in 2020 when I stand at Add the preposition
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and almost 7 months did not see anybody. I so missed with my friends and colleagues. It is really influenced to
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and doing nothing. Moreover
, I think hiking marches and expeditions are better than others. Because everybody like nature and beautiful places.
In conclusion, what I need is camping trips. Our youth sits at home
, watch youtube or TikTok and thinks that it is cool, but if they learn more about outing and travelling, especially to beautiful places, it would help them to meet each other at least a little bit.Submitted by akzharkyn010191 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- moreover
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