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Although art is an important subject in schools, it is felt that there are more important subjects students should be doing first

#art #schools #subjects #students #first
There have been many renowned artists throughout history, that are still remembered for their imaginative and original works to
this
 day. So, of course
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it must be very important to be
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 to the new generation. But how does “
art
” work as a school subject and does it even do something for the children?
Art
 can give a lot of benefits to children.
Firstly
, it can work as a creative outlet for the students. They can express themselves on the sheet of paper
however
 they want and can bring forward their most bizarre and creative ideas.
Secondly
, through the use of
art
,
other subject
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 can become easier to understand. Studies have shown that instruction becomes more effective when educators integrate creative activities.
This
 can be achieved by
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classes with a strong emphasis on drawing, painting, playing music, performing drama, and other creative pursuits.
However
, for a lot of people
art
 can appear useless. They wish to focus solely on logical and science
type
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 of education. As there are a lot of
high paying
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professions that require
an advanced knowledge
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 in a specific field, people wish to focus only on it.
Art
 is a great medium not only for students
,
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 but
also
 adults to express themselves through their creative and unique way of thinking. Encouraging students to use their imagination can help them actively engage with new concepts and discover connections between ideas
as well as
 provide advantages for their social and emotional well-being.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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