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Some people say that the main environmental problem of a time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #time #loss #species #plants #animals
The environment is a valuable part of over and other life,
however
 in modern days number of
people
, do not notice environmental issues
such
 as
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 of plants and animals, some
people
 think that there are more significant environmental problems, even so, I believe that there are other problems which are
also
 important as well as the laws of particular species of plants and animal, Without a doubt, the environment is
wonderful
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the wonderful
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 and universal place for
animal
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animals
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 and new species of plant, there are some
and
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advantages for public personality uses the flower and
animal
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animals
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 for getting treatment and even clothes from their skins, a perfect example for these are
pochers
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poachers
 who killed
animal
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an animal
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 to make more money and sell them to others, one more example of
this
 is
fire
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 which
people
 do on nature fire.
Bolkar
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Booker
Balkar
 in the forest is one of the most terrible thing as well as for those who
destroys
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 not only creatures but
also
 plant. Some may argue that in the world other numerous environmental problems.
For instance
 pollution or global warming. Where were the most environmental problem is what
people
 do with their arms. We could do something to avoid fire pollution gases from factories and other aspects.
Everyday
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 we used cars factories so on but these gases destroy our atmosphere and let some light pass through the layer with that activity we can save our planet and keep it safe Conclusion there are many environmental
problem
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 of our time,
however
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 we have to do everything at least prevent our mistakes
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  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
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