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Many people prefer to use public transportation while others say that personal cars are the best mode of transportation. Excessive use of private cars is considered to be the main reason for the traffic jam in many cities and that's why the use of public transportation is encouraged. In your opinion what are the pros and cons of using public transport?

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While some
people
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use
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transportation
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, others prefer to
use
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 their own cars. It is believed that the excessive usage of personal cars has caused congestion problems in big cities and
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people
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 should
use
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 public
transportation
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 more often.
However
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, public
transportations
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 have their own positive and negative sides and the following essay will discuss them in detail. It is undeniable, that public
transportations
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 have some weaknesses. Some
people
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 still choose to
use
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 their own private vehicles, though the government has encouraged them to
use
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 public transport. It is because public
transportations
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 are not as safe as private cars and some criminal activities on public buses or trains
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 as pocket thieves are still being reported. And
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 public
transportations
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 are not reliable in terms of preciseness and accuracy. Many
people
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 have complained about the preciseness and the consistency of these public
transportations
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 schedules, which impacted their work or study time. Despite its weak points, public
transportations
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 bring a lot of benefits for individuals and societies.
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, it is clear that the existence of public
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 will automatically reduce traffic problems.
Secondly
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, if the utilisation of public
transportation
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 increases, it means that there will be a reduction in the consumption of fossil fuels.
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, it will reduce air pollution and global warming issues.
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, the governments should encourage their residents to
use
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 public
transportation
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. In conclusion,
people
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 have different opinions about public
transportation
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. Some
people
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 enjoy using them, while others choose to
use
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 their own personal vehicles.
Although
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 public
transportations
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 have some weaknesses, I do believe that the benefits outweighed the drawbacks. I
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 suggest that the government should improve the public
transportation
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 services,
therefore
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 more and more
people
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 are attracted to
use
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 public
transportations
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.
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