In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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rapidly changing technology has made human life easy. In upcoming days, the transport medium we use will be fully

autometed

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automated

thus

the only part we are going to perform is the travel in it as

a passengers

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. There are many facts that prove, humans intervention in the work have made errors, whereas the

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machines

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outperform

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same

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work without any mistake

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same applies to driving.

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the main feature of automated

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is they are connected to each

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through the Internet because of

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they are able to

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information

such

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block

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live traffic conditions. With the help of

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, the

cars

are programmed for suggesting and selecting the fastest route,

as a

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passengers

traveling

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inside are able to reach the destination on time.

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cars

are fully equip

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with many sensors to detect any movement around them

such

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crossing of the animal on the

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the new

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machine use breaks urgently for the safety of the animals as well as the passenger inside.

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on time

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movement of workers and goods.

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, these

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trucks and buses can be a problem as they are always connected to the Internet. When it comes to

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cyber security we still

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, as many hackers can outperform the hacking and a changing the route perhaps, they can program the vehicles in

way

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that can cause detrimental effects on passengers.

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, the main effects will

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a place in the employment as drivers job will no longer

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. In conclusion, I

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transport has certainly

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us.

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to that, considering the factors above I can say that the

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cars

will

significatly

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significantly

improve

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quality

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of life.

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adavanges

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advantages

advances

of having a

computer operated

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vehicle

outweight

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outweigh

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the disadvantages.

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