Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others, however, deny that these factors have any significant influence on people’s behaviour. What is your opinion on that issue?

Nowadays, the diversity of television programs and video

games

allow audiences to enjoy

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experiences

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of experiences

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.

However

, some

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groups

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claim that programs and

games

that contain cruel fights, wicked

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, and bullying might have negative influences on people. From my perspective, I completely agree that audiences might be affected by

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violent images.

Moreover

, the below essay will probe the possible reasons and some solvents on

this

matter.

To begin

with, action and thriller shows and

games

are invented to provide the public with

the

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sense of

excite

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excitement

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. Yet, these violent visions might not bring only entertainment but

also

lead to imitation.

For example

, children and teenagers that have not developed complete personalities and thinking could learn the bad behaviours from the

games

to tease their classmates for fun. The most dangerous thing is that they might not

aware

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of these pranks could lead to a lethal attack

accidently

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accidentally

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others.

Furthermore

, there are

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evidence

pieces of evidence

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can be seen on

news

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that some people with physical problems behaved the same as they learnt from the violent videos. In fact, if governments want to reduce criminals, which

caused

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by imitating vicious behaviours from movies and

games

, they could inhibit particular ages to watch those movies with bad actions seriously.

Also

, every game could print

warning

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a warning

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on its packing to inform its consumers or ask players to sign a contract to make sure they will not hurt anyone after they watch the cruel plots. To explain

further

, players would be punished, if they did something bad to someone. In summary, though

violence

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violent

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videos allow us to experience both scare and

excite

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excitement

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, it must not ignore that violation is prohibited in society.