In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays,some individuals claim that it is important to build more subway lines,so authorities spend more money on
railway
systems.In contrast
,some public argue
that public transport is dominant in everyone's lifeChange the verb form
argues
,
because it is convenient for all Remove the comma
apply
people
.this
essay will discuss both sides.
To embark on,In my opinion,railway
's are best
way to commute from one place to another place.Change the article
the best
firstly
,it is more
cheaper than public facilities like buses,autos.Change the word
apply
moreover
,there is no traffic problem,so we can reach destination
on time.Add an article
the destination
although
railway
facilities available
,Add a missing verb
are available
people
prefer to commute by public vechiles
.Correct your spelling
vehicles
for instance
,if we want to travel long hours than
we should choose only Subway,because In train ample amenities available Replace the word
then
such
as restrooms,beds and food items.even we can sleep on
Change preposition
in
bed
,Add an article
the bed
a bed
moreover
sometimes we find entertainment from Add a comma
,moreover
people
.
On another hand,it is difficult to commute by public amenities,because roads are congested and price
of the tickets is expensive.Correct article usage
the price
additionally
,we can not reach destination
on time due to traffic congestion.Add an article
the destination
furthermore
,pollution from vechiles
is very high it leads to several skin diseases.Correct your spelling
vehicles
for example
,according to world
health organisation,most Add an article
the world
people
are struggling with skin diseases as pollution in order to reduce this
,people
will travel by train.sometimes both are dominant,to exemplify this
,if we want to reach railway
station,Add an article
the railway
then
we have to go railway
station by bus or auto only.
To conclude,every try
to commute by train in order Change the verb form
tries
to
we can get rid of pollution.ultimately,health problems Correct your spelling
so
also
reduced.Add a missing verb
are also
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