you recentely receved a letter from a freind asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try tp get a job. you think she should get a job. write a letter to this friend. in your letter - Say why she would not enjoy going to college - explain why getting a job is a good idea for her -suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for her

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Hello Anna, How are you? It has been
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a long time since we have been able to catch up and meet each other. I hope you and your family members all are doing good. I'm writing to give you some advice about whether to go to
college
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or to try to get a
job
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. Let me describe what I think
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issue. Even though I have graduated from the University of Georgia, I do not have a decent
job
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. What I mean is, you will pay too much to join
college
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, but eventually you might struggle to find a decent
job
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that pays sustainable income.
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, studying in
college
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is overwhelming so much that you are not going to enjoy it at all. I would like to tell you that getting a
job
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now is more practical than going to
college
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. Because you have a family and I don't think you can afford to pay your tuition fees
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your bills.
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you have many casual jobs options in your areas, I think you could fit more in retail stores. I can't wait to hear back from you. Best wishes, Jay
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