Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Wild
animals
are an essential part of our ecosystems. Use synonyms
However
, with the increasing human Linking Words
Use synonyms
population
wild animal populations get decrease at an alarming rate. Even under Add a comma
,population
such
kind of ,Linking Words
Add an article
a situation
situation
some Add a comma
,situation
people
opine that a few selected wild Use synonyms
animals
should be protected, while some other Use synonyms
people
have a totally controversial idea about that. The Use synonyms
second
category Linking Words
believesthat
all wild Correct your spelling
believes that
believe that
animals
should be protected. I completely agree with the latter view, and in Use synonyms
this
,essay l will discuss it giving suitable examples to demonstrate arguments and support points.
Mother Linking Words
Earth
is a massive ecosystem, which provides habitats for numerous flora and fauna species. Use synonyms
Therefore
, as ,humans we cannot decide who should live thereLinking Words
,
because we are just Remove the comma
apply
one
species on the Use synonyms
earth
. The persistence of the balanced environment heavily rely on each and every animal that lives on the Use synonyms
earth
, thereby it is our responsibility to protect all wild Use synonyms
animals
. To exemplify that, when we think about a food chain that starts with green plants, butterflies, frogs, and Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
last
Linking Words
one
is an eagle. If we think eagles should not be conserved, Use synonyms
then
their Linking Words
population
will easily decline to allow the frog Use synonyms
population
to spread quickly. The ultimate outcome would be an unbalanced ecosystem. Other than that, wild Use synonyms
animals
have the same right to live like us, and Use synonyms
one
animal cannot be replaced by another animal. Because most of these creatures have evolved million years ago, even before humans and they have a unique role on the planet.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, some Linking Words
people
opine that Use synonyms
instead
of protecting all wild Linking Words
animals
it is better to protect a few selected ones. The Use synonyms
first
question that arises with Linking Words
this
is, Linking Words
then
which Linking Words
animals
must be conserved and what is the basis for Use synonyms
this
selection. Since being a part of nature humans do not allow to alter the environment as they wish. Here Linking Words
people
will argue, it is better to protect rare, attractive, and very popular Use synonyms
animals
Use synonyms
such
as elephants, rhinos, lions, cheetahs and so on. ,Linking Words
,
Change the punctuation
apply
Linking Words
However
it should not be forgotten thatAdd a comma
,However
,
it is unfair to prioritize others' right to live. As well all these wild faunas add beauty to our surroundings.
As Remove the comma
apply
such
it can be concluded thatLinking Words
,
to make a better future it is very important to protect all wild Remove the comma
apply
animals
without selecting a few of them. As the most intelligent species live on the Use synonyms
earth
it is our responsibility to take care of these things, if not Use synonyms
one
day the balance of the Use synonyms
earth
will collapse creating problems without solutions.
It will easily decline by allowing Use synonyms
frog
Correct article usage
the frog
population
to increase.Use synonyms
Submitted by tharukaperera141 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example