Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Wild

animals

are an essential part of our ecosystems.

However

, with the increasing human

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wild animal populations get decrease at an alarming rate. Even under

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some

people

opine that a few selected wild

animals

should be protected, while some other

people

have a totally controversial idea about that. The

second

category

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believes that

believe that

all wild

animals

should be protected. I completely agree with the latter view, and in

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,essay l will discuss it giving suitable examples to demonstrate arguments and support points. Mother

Earth

is a massive ecosystem, which provides habitats for numerous flora and fauna species.

Therefore

, as ,humans we cannot decide who should live there

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because we are just

one

species on the

earth

. The persistence of the balanced environment heavily rely on each and every animal that lives on the

earth

, thereby it is our responsibility to protect all wild

animals

. To exemplify that, when we think about a food chain that starts with green plants, butterflies, frogs, and

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last

one

is an eagle. If we think eagles should not be conserved,

then

their

population

will easily decline to allow the frog

population

to spread quickly. The ultimate outcome would be an unbalanced ecosystem. Other than that, wild

animals

have the same right to live like us, and

one

animal cannot be replaced by another animal. Because most of these creatures have evolved million years ago, even before humans and they have a unique role on the planet.

On the other hand

, some

people

opine that

instead

of protecting all wild

animals

it is better to protect a few selected ones. The

first

question that arises with

this

is,

then

which

animals

must be conserved and what is the basis for

this

selection. Since being a part of nature humans do not allow to alter the environment as they wish. Here

people

will argue, it is better to protect rare, attractive, and very popular

animals

such

as elephants, rhinos, lions, cheetahs and so on. ,

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it should not be forgotten that

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it is unfair to prioritize others' right to live. As well all these wild faunas add beauty to our surroundings. As

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it can be concluded that

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to make a better future it is very important to protect all wild

animals

without selecting a few of them. As the most intelligent species live on the

earth

it is our responsibility to take care of these things, if not

one

day the balance of the

earth

will collapse creating problems without solutions. It will easily decline by allowing

frog

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population

to increase.