Whether or not someone achieves their aims in life is mostly a question of luck? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, an issue related to the importance of
luck
in our lives has been widely discussed among people
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the world. Some argue that
luck
plays the most vital role in achieving our aims. As far as diligence, talent and scientific methods are concerned, I strongly hold that someone achieving their aims in life does not mostly depend on
luck
.
To begin
with, diligence is always the most obvious way towards success.
For instance
, Jay Chou is a famous pop music star who is very diligent. Before he became famous, he had to do many boring works to earn his keep
while
composing music. Once, he wrote 50 songs in 10 days, which won him the opportunity to release his first record.
In addition
, talent is
also
important. Someone who has exceptional gifts can achieve their aims with less diligence, like the 100-meter athlete Bolt. Except for these two factors, I think a scientific method plays a more important role than
luck
as well.
For example
, the famous 100-meter athlete Bintian Su. His talent may not be very well among professional athletes.
However
, he has a scientific approach to training. His performance saw a significant improvement after his starting technique
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been optimized scientifically. Eventually, he broke the Asian 100-meter record in
Tokyo
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Olympics. It is undeniable that
luck
is beneficial to our success when we are close to our aims. But other factors decide whether we can get close to success. In conclusion, lucky people may achieve their aims easily. But, there are many other factors that play more vital roles in our lives.
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Ensure all parts of the prompt are addressed in the introduction and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear and logical flow throughout the essay with appropriate use of transitions.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • aims
  • determination
  • resilience
  • opportunities
  • effort
  • planning
  • unpredictability
  • innovation
  • perseverance
  • perception
  • sustainability
  • adaptation
  • networking
  • initiative
  • random chance
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