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Now a days, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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In modern society, many
students
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 in various countries tend to avoid taking
science
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courses
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 in university.
This
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 trend is caused by some following factors. In my view, some issues can arise in various aspects of societies from
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 trend.  Admittedly, it is true that
science
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courses
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,
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, physics and
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-related engineering, are extremely academic,
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, leaner who take the
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 have swamped lives because they have to spend a lot of time on study and experiments.
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, the
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 generally do not have enough spare time for rest.
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, high school
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 should participate in many
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,
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 as Math 12 and Biology 12, in high school to apply
science
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subjects
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.
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 only a few
students
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 who are eminent can do that, there are not many outstanding
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.
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, universities'
science
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subjects
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 face a lack of
students
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 for the following reasons.
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, the lack of leaner who take
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subjects
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 in universities will result in some serious problems in the communities and societies.
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 with, with the development of technologies, civilizations have advanced,
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, people can have better lives.
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, people's life expectancy is getting higher through advanced medical technology.
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, these innovative technologies are created by scientists and engineers,
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, more workers related to
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 are required to improve the civilizations.
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, society and communities will struggle with slow growth in various aspects,
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 as public health and environmental issues, because of a lack of scientists. In conclusion, not many
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 apply
science
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subjects
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 in universities, and the difficulty of those
courses
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 and
students
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' abilities cause
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 situation.
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, society and the community will face some issues in the future.
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  • promotion
  • opportunities
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