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Summerise the inforamtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

#summerise #inforamtion #features #comparisons
The given maps describe the information about the improvement of the countryside in
Reymouth
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Weymouth
 over the
twenty-five year
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 from 1995 to present. Overall, it can be seen that clearly farmland and forest were eliminated and new sporting centre,
cafe
 and
resturant
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restaurant
 was formed. According to the 1995 map describes,
fishing
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the fishing
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 port was located in the south of
Reymouth
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Weymouth
 along with
fish
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the fish
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 market and
cafe
, on the other side of
cafe
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the cafe
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 was located. In the
north-east
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northeast
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 of
Reymouth
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Weymouth
 farmland, with forest park. In the
north-west
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northwest
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 had eight houses. Turning to the present map illustrates, in the
narth
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north
-earth of farmland and forest had replaced by the golf and tennis. To the north-west, the hosing number was doubled and in the south side,
fish
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the fish
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 market was replaced by the apartments and
cafe
 has not changed anything,
fish
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the fish
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 port was eliminated,
on the other hand
,
shop
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the shop
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 was destroyed and
resturant
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restaurant
 was developed and
hotel
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the hotel
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 has along with new parking space.
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