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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems

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It is clear that living in a foreign
country
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 is the hardest experience that someone can have in his life. It is believed that living in a
country
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 with linguistic differences can lead to vital social
problems
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 as well as practical
problems
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.in my opinion, I agree that speaking a foreign
language
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 in another
country
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 can cause serious
problems
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. While living abroad have its benefit, we can not avoid its
problems
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 of it. One of the most important
problems
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 that should be considered is the social problem. Ones who recently immigrated to a new
country
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 with a different
language
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 can feel isolated because when you are new in a different society it is really hard to communicate in a new
language
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 and find new friends.
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 of
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, newcomers often have a fear of not being accepted in the new community.
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,
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 situation can decrease people self-esteem and cause a lot of social
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 that lead to feeling isolated. Another point that should be considered is that not only can we encounter social
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, but we can
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 contemplate practical
problems
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 for newcomers.
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, when someone immigrates to a new
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, they face whole new culture with different aspects that they don’t know anything about it. Misunderstanding new culture,
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, can lead to fear of doing something wrong and against
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 culture.
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, focusing on speaking a foreign
language
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 can affect their efficiency in a work environment too. In conclusion, living in a
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 where you have to speak
their
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 own
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 can cause a lot of
problems
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such
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 as social and practical
problems
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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