Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

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of the population of the world today has become

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on their mobile phones. Some schools have banned the

use

of cell phones by

students

on campus. In my

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this

rule will have a positive effect on children as it will not only improve their

focus

but

also

help them develop their social skills. Restricting phone

use

in the classroom will improve the

students

focus

thus

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better learning experience.Without their cellular

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students

will be less distracted from the teacher and it will become easier to pay attention in class.

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without any distractions from the ringing and buzzing

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these children will

focus

more on the task in front of them and not check their notifications. If not

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their lack of

focus

can become a serious problem in life as they would not be able to give their utmost attention to any specific task.

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I think restricting phones would help learners in improving their

focus

and attention spans. Another reason why I think limiting

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of these devices will be a positive development as it will

also

help pupils to develop their social skills.

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is simply because

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access to social media and messaging applications,

students

are more likely to interact more with the

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people surrounding them in real life which in return would help them understand social cues. They will discuss various topics and even play more games with their classmates,

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and form healthier habits.

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Continuous

access to social media and

internet

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the internet

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can make people

detatched

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detached

from reality and have

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a negative

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effect on their social life. Restricting

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phone

use

will help children in staying

conected

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connected

with their immediate surroundings and have better social well-being. In conclusion,it is important to teach the young to

use

things in moderation and help in

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healthy lifestyle habits.I support the restriction of

cellullar

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cellular

devices on school campuses by

students

as I think it will help them better their

focus

spans and

also

build their social skills.