Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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With the current internet boom and the upgrade of mobile technology, social media have created a vital place in our life. At every step of the way individuals upload their pictures, update their location and personal information. Linking Words
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, getting along with neighbours has become a difficult task, many avoid the social gathering etc. Linking Words
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, people are becoming more jealous of others lifestyles. They feel depressed and regretful. For an instance, a husband and wife had divorces just because the husband thoughts was inspired by someone’s lifestyle.
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