The development of tourism has contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language?

In the
tourism
industry,
english
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is the
most
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leading
language
to be spoken in the
world
. Many
believes
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that due to
this
reason, someday
English
will become the only
language
which
people
prefer to speak globally. In my opinion, it has many
benifits
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benefits
because
English
is the most convenient and spoken
language
but
people
should globalise their national
language
country wise. In the
tourism
industry,
people
prefer
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english
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language
as
a
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communication because there are different
people
from different
countries
who
visit
many
tourist
places and they all can understand and speak
English
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language
so it is very much convenient for
people
as well as
tourist
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a tourist
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guide
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guides
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as well. Because the guild can explain everything in
English
so that almost many of the
people
can understand it. For
an
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example, five
people
visit
tourist
place
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places
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from different
countries
so it is very much tough for the guide to explain them
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everything
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every thing
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everything
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in their own
language
but
English
is the one which is
tought
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taught
thought
in high schools in most of the
countries
so that it becomes easy and
time saving
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to the guide to explain anything in
English
for once and everyone can understand it.
However
, there is
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no
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not
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doubt about the
English
language
is becoming the most preferred
language
in the
world
and in
the
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tourism
and
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but there are many
countries
such
as Japan, China, Poland etc, where
people
prefer their own national
language
as a medium of instruction and communication whether it is professional field or
tourism
. So if
people
know only
English
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language
and
visit
above mentioned
countries
then
they can face issues to understand their
language
as well as they can't even make anyone understands
that
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what they want to say or discuss
about
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.
For instance
, if
India
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people
visit
tourist
places in
Japana
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Japan
or China, most of them do not understand their
language
because they know
English
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language
only and that will lead them to struggle in the
world
. To sum up
this
,
English
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language
is the most famous and preferable
language
in the
world
and can help to survive in most of the
countries
.
However
, knowing one
language
is a drawback
also
especially when
people
visit
non
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english
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speaking
countries
.
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  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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