The development of tourism has contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language?

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prefer to speak globally. In my opinion, it has many
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should globalise their national
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country wise. In the
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prefer
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communication because there are different
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from different
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who
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many
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places and they all can understand and speak
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so it is very much convenient for
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as well. Because the guild can explain everything in
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so it is very much tough for the guide to explain them
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every thing
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in their own
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but
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is the one which is
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taught
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to the guide to explain anything in
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not
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but there are many
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prefer their own national
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as a medium of instruction and communication whether it is professional field or
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know only
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they can face issues to understand their
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what they want to say or discuss
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because they know
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only and that will lead them to struggle in the
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is the most famous and preferable
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and can help to survive in most of the
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speaking
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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