You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Arguably, peasants are many times safeguarded by high taxes imposed by the local regime on farming goods coming from other nations. Personally, I strongly agree with the view since it is a way
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to valorise Change preposition
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local products. Correct article usage
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Although
the measure is public funds consuming. Linking Words
This
essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.
On the one hand, the high tariffs protect the local farming industry. Linking Words
In other words
, the development glosses over from stacking foreign products on the shelves of the supermarkets at a low cost making the customers have the preference for what is produced locally. Linking Words
For instance
, the cotton industry in Mozambique could have collapsed if the agricultural ministry Linking Words
have
not increased the taxes from a Wrong verb form
had
metical
per kilogram to almost 5 meticais per kilogram. Correct your spelling
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As a result
, the local farmers have their livelihood safeguarded and the local economy experienced steady growth.
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On the other hand
, the high taxes applied in farming foods have a high bill to pay. Because of the need for compensation done by the government to avoid fluctuation of the prices internationally, Linking Words
this
approach is a high financial Linking Words
resources
squandering. Change the noun form
resource
For example
, the Mozambique ruling power Linking Words
last
year frittered roughly a million dollars in these sorts of payments. Linking Words
Hence
, it undoubtedly affected the national budget and Linking Words
lead
to public money dissipation. Wrong verb form
led
Furthermore
, it is the overriding reason for other areas of national development discontentment likeLinking Words
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, and security once they believe these amounts of resources could be used to ameliorate these fields.
In conclusion, notwithstanding Replace the word
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public investment squandering, each cabinet should bear the Verb problem
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peasants
costs owing to the fact that it is an outlet to put food on the table. Change noun form
peasant's
peasants'
Therefore
I still strongly agree with the view.Linking Words
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coherence cohesion
Ensure your introduction clearly states your position and introduces the main points you will discuss in the essay. In the conclusion, summarize your main arguments and restate your position.
task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the prompt and provide a balanced argument. Consider discussing potential counterarguments to strengthen your response.