You recently on a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition.  Please describe Competition and prize  About the photograph  Invite your friend.

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Dear Rossi,  I hope you are healthy and safe. Today I am writing
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letter to inform you that, as you know at present I won a
photography
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competition and my photo is going to be displayed in on exhibition and I want your presence there. To embark with, as you know I am pretty good at
photography
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. I have completed a
photography
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course.
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month, I went to my uncle village and there I saw peacocks on their front lawn. My uncle told me that they were regular visitors. I could capture some close-ups of those peacocks and peahens, that even I could not believe my eyes when I saw those photographs.  Every year I participate in a
photography
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competition conducted by an NGO in my hometown.
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,
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year I won the
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prize.
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, the price is a trophy and 20,000 cash.
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, my photographs are going to be presented in an exhibition which will be held in shilpakala academy. 
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, I would like you to attend
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exhibition I will be very delighted if you come.
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, it will make our relationship stronger than earlier. No more today. Hope to see you soon. With Love, Zannatul
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