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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #outweigh
Nowadays,many individuals
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 to purchase things like clothes,groceries and electronic gadgets through online platforms
such
 as
flipcart
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Flipkart
,amazon.because they do not have enough
time
 to go outside due to their own busy
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.
this
 essay will discuss both the merits and demerits. To embark on,there are ample benefits
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to
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 online shopping.
firstly
,people need not
to
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go shopping malls.
therfore
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therefore
,people can save
time
.
secondly
,there
are
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 no transport
cost
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costs
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 just do simply at home by mobile phone.
moreover
,it takes less
time
 compared to direct shopping.
in addition
 to
this
,no worries about the crowd near
billing
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the billing
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 counter.
furthermore
,it facilitates not only more
dicounts
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discounts
 but
also
 provides safety.
for instance
,during the pandemic,many people are afraid to go outside to buy things
what
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that
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 they need, so at that
time
 online platforms
vey
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very
 useful to take all things.
moreover
,there is a chance to compare all the brands and lower prices.
finally
,scroll down various options to purchase
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a thing
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thing
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things
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by
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on
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internet
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the internet
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. On another hand,it is truly said,no rose without thrones.can the drawback of
this
 initiation can be ignored?there are
also
 some demerits
by
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 shopping online.
initially
,sometimes
quality
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the quality
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 of products is not good.
moreover
,fraud in online shopping is the biggest disadvantage.because
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there is no chance to touch the product as well as
delay
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a delay
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 in the delivery.some individuals love to bargain ,but here they can not bargain.
for example
,I bought clothes one month ago for my sister wedding on flipcart,it shows me that these products deliver
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within
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with in
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within
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 ten days when I was shopping
on
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online,but I did not receive clothes
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with in
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within
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time
. To conclude,I think,the pros are more than cons,but it depends on customers,so customers decide by themselves whether the online shopping is best or offline is good.everyone should be very careful to take new items either from online or store.
Submitted by anushachenna15 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • lack of physical interaction
  • try or test products
  • potential for fraud or scams
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