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The line map describes the information about the altering amount of offence that happened in three various locations of crime namely, Burglary,
Car
theft
 and
Robbery
 in New port city centre over the ten years of the period between 2003 and 2012, units are measured in numbers of incidents. Overall,
Bulglary
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Burglary
Bulgaria
 was the most offence in initial period
then
car
theft
 was dominated while
robbery
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the robbery
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 was the least amount of felony in
port
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the port
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 city centre.
Accroding
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According
 to the graph illustrates, in the initial period,
bulgary
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Bulgaria
 was the most
theft
, with an average of 3400 and the
next
 year,
this
 figure was peaked at 3700
number of
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incidents, but there was a significant fall and reached 1200 in 2008 and
bulgary
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Bulgaria
burglary
bulgar
 felony was increased slightly, which is around 14000 in 2009. From 2009 to 2012, there was a
stead
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 level off . In terms of
car
theft
 in 2003, there was accounted for 2800
then
this
 proportion was decreased gradually and reached 2000 in 2006. From 2006 to 2012,
car
theft
 was
fluctatued
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fluctuated
 and reached 2700 in the final year.
In contrast
,
robbery
theft
 was just 600 in 2003 and
this
 figure for increased by 300 in 2005. Between 2005 and 2008, there was a gradual
decrese
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decrease
 in the
robbery
 from 900 to 500. In the final year,
this
 was accounted for just 700.
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