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The line map describes the information about the altering amount of offence that happened in three various locations of crime namely, Burglary,
Car
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theft
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and
Robbery
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in New port city centre over the ten years of the period between 2003 and 2012, units are measured in numbers of incidents. Overall,
Bulglary
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Burglary
Bulgaria
was the most offence in initial period
then
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car
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theft
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was dominated while
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robbery
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the robbery
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was the least amount of felony in
port
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the port
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city centre.
Accroding
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According
to the graph illustrates, in the initial period,
bulgary
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Bulgaria
was the most
theft
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, with an average of 3400 and the
next
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year,
this
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figure was peaked at 3700
number of
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incidents, but there was a significant fall and reached 1200 in 2008 and
bulgary
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Bulgaria
burglary
bulgar
felony was increased slightly, which is around 14000 in 2009. From 2009 to 2012, there was a
stead
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level off . In terms of
car
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theft
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in 2003, there was accounted for 2800
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this
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proportion was decreased gradually and reached 2000 in 2006. From 2006 to 2012,
car
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theft
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was
fluctatued
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fluctuated
and reached 2700 in the final year.
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,
robbery
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theft
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was just 600 in 2003 and
this
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figure for increased by 300 in 2005. Between 2005 and 2008, there was a gradual
decrese
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decrease
in the
robbery
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from 900 to 500. In the final year,
this
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was accounted for just 700.

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