Nowadays,
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struggling to achieve their ambitions, because many individuals believe that having a victorious future is very imperative to survive happily without worries and tensions.
,others claim that consuming a lot of
with families is important.In my view,we need determination towards our goals to get a decent salary.
essay will discuss both statements.
To embark on,there are ample benefits by getting a successful future.
,we can earn more money in order to we can purchase anything that we need.
,there is a chance to live luxurious life like having own house and car.
,increases satisfaction rate as well as decreases stress.
,it gives you a sense of identity as well as there is a chance to become
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person.
to
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on other people.there is
one disadvantage,you do not have enough
to do entertainment,because you
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with how to reach your goal.
,according to
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,
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future ensures healthier life and amusement.
On another hand,
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,so every child try to communicate with them.the advantage of consuming
with them
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mental health.
,the greatest gifts
give their children is nurturing and caring for them as they grow into adults.
,every child
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that taking care of families is
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thing.when I was young,my family used to take care of me,now,it is my responsibility to protect them by talking with them.
,these days,nursing homes are rapidly increasing due to careless of people.many individuals put their
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because they do not have enough
to see them.
To conclude,people have diverse mindsets which vary from one person to
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,so it depends on their choice,whether the career is important or
are important.