Many countries are experiencing population growth, and need to build more homes. Some say that new homes should constructed in existing cities while others argues that new towns should be built to accommodate the growing population. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these point of view

Many

cities

experienced

over population

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overpopulation

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that

requieres

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requires

to construct

more

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of more

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new

homes

. Some

of

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apply

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people

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the people

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claim that new

homes

should be constructed in

existing

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the existing

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city

while others

argues

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argue

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that new

homes

need to be built to

accomodate

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accommodate

this

growing population. The main benefits of

this

are decreasing the price of new

homes

and

increase

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salary for those who agree to

move

to new towns;

however

, the disadvantages for building new

homes

on

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in

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existing

cities

are decreasing the quality of new

homes

and expensive

houses

. Decreasing the

prices

of new

homes

will attract more

people

to

move

to

a

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apply

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new

towns

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town

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, so

this

will avoid overcrowded

places

.

First

, one of many

people

's

dream

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dreams

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is to buy their own house;

however

, they are unaffordable to get in the

city

. By offering low

prices

and spacious

houses

and apartments

people

will be willing to invest and

move

to another town.

Second

, it is

importnat

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important

to

built

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build

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more

cities

in which

people

can

growth

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grow

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and have their own space.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, usually

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government

goverment

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the goverment

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offers to increase

people

's

salary

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salaries

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to compensate the

willigness

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willingness

to

move

to another village.

Therefore

,

people

do not think too much and accept to emigrate to other

places

. Believing

tha

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that

they will have better income make

easier

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it easier

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to

move

and start again.

For instance

, in California

houses

are more affordable to buy in the suburbs and most

people

accept to

move

to be able to buy their own house.

Hence

, overcrowded

places

are avoid

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are avoided

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and families have more spacious

houses

to live

.

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in.

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Although

people

dislike

to live

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living

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in crowded

places

some of them are not willing to

move

and they decided to stay in

a low quality apartments

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a low quality apartment

low quality apartments

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. In the

city

, there are modern buildings that

offers

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multi-

leves

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level

levels

apartments in which overpopulation is one of the main issues. On top of

this

, there is no parking for everyone.

Besides

,

usually

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there are more than two families living in each apartment, so space is a huge problem. The streets look always crowded because there

are

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is

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always someone waiting for

an

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a

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spot.

For example

, if

an

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a

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student

need

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needs

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to

move

a car from the street because it is time to go to school, one of their

parent

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parents

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needs to

move

another car to save the spot or there will be no space when getting back.

Hence

,

stressful

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in stressful

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situations like

this

most of the families live every day. To conclude, it is necessary to built new towns to

accomodate

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accommodate

overpopulation because the apartment's quality decrease when a

city

is crowded.

Moreover

,

prices

for renting a place to live

goes

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go

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to the top

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of

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pf

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of

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the roof.

Therefore

, it is vital to avoid overcrowded

cities

to decrease rental

prices

and reduce street pollution.