Many countries are experiencing population growth, and need to build more homes. Some say that new homes should constructed in existing cities while others argues that new towns should be built to accommodate the growing population. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these point of view

Many

cities

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experienced

over population

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overpopulation

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that

requieres

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requires

to construct

more

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of more

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new

homes

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. Some

of

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apply

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people

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the people

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claim that new

homes

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should be constructed in

existing

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the existing

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city

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while others

argues

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that new

homes

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need to be built to

accomodate

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accommodate

this

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growing population. The main benefits of

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are decreasing the price of new

homes

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and

increase

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increasing

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salary for those who agree to

move

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to new towns;

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, the disadvantages for building new

homes

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on

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in

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existing

cities

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are decreasing the quality of new

homes

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and expensive

houses

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. Decreasing the

prices

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of new

homes

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will attract more

people

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to

move

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to

a

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apply

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new

towns

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town

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, so

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will avoid overcrowded

places

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.

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, one of many

people

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's

dream

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dreams

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is to buy their own house;

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, they are unaffordable to get in the

city

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. By offering low

prices

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and spacious

houses

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and apartments

people

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will be willing to invest and

move

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to another town.

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, it is

importnat

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important

to

built

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build

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more

cities

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in which

people

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can

growth

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grow

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and have their own space.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, usually

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government

goverment

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the goverment

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offers to increase

people

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's

salary

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salaries

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to compensate the

willigness

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willingness

to

move

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to another village.

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,

people

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do not think too much and accept to emigrate to other

places

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. Believing

tha

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that

they will have better income make

easier

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it easier

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to

move

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and start again.

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, in California

houses

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are more affordable to buy in the suburbs and most

people

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accept to

move

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to be able to buy their own house.

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, overcrowded

places

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are avoid

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and families have more spacious

houses

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to live

.

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in.

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people

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dislike

to live

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living

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in crowded

places

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some of them are not willing to

move

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and they decided to stay in

a low quality apartments

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a low quality apartment

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. In the

city

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, there are modern buildings that

offers

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offer

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multi-

leves

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level

levels

apartments in which overpopulation is one of the main issues. On top of

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, there is no parking for everyone.

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,

usually

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there are more than two families living in each apartment, so space is a huge problem. The streets look always crowded because there

are

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is

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always someone waiting for

an

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a

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spot.

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, if

an

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a

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student

need

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needs

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to

move

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a car from the street because it is time to go to school, one of their

parent

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parents

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needs to

move

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another car to save the spot or there will be no space when getting back.

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,

stressful

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in stressful

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situations like

this

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most of the families live every day. To conclude, it is necessary to built new towns to

accomodate

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accommodate

overpopulation because the apartment's quality decrease when a

city

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is crowded.

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,

prices

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for renting a place to live

goes

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go

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to the top

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of

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pf

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of

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the roof.

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, it is vital to avoid overcrowded

cities

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to decrease rental

prices

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and reduce street pollution.