With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

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natural beauty as it is losing
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purpose. If we do not focus on the methods of resolving it we mind end up living in a
poluted
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polluted
atmosphare
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atmosphere
. The main advantage of protecting
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natural beauty is that we can have
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environment for living. As the population is increasing day by day which is directly
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effecting
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the
demonishment
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admonishment
demolishment
of green
areas
as people are utilizing that land for
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. If we focus on avoiding
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destruction
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of trees we are indirectly helping humans to live healthy life
therefore
instead
of abolishing it we should be more focused on saving
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.
The tourism
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is the utmost benefit of saving natural
areas
as most of the residents of the developing countries prefer spending their holidays in
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underdeveloped
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under developed
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countries or cities because
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them a feeling of attachment to
this
world. A person feels
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and calm while watching green colour
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why most
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people
perfers
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prefers
prefer
to travel to the
areas
with lots of trees and grass.
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Pakistan, become
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tourists
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attraction because of its northern
areas
. Because of the wide range of natural locations, verity of trees and high mountain peaks. One of the
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to
this
problem is providing awareness to the locals about the consequences they can face after losing these spots. Tell people about the importance of
this
avtivity
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activity
and why
this
is
baneficial
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beneficial
.
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solution can be implementing some regulations like if someone tries to abolish these locations a heavy fine with imprisonment can be imposed. Another alternative could be
goverment
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government
should restrict urban
centers
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to be built nearby a natural location ask them to plan them in rural
areas
. There are
noumrous
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numerous
benefits of saving the beautiful locations in urban
areas
so we should be more focused on saving them for better living.
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