Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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revenue

from successfully

world

-class athletes is higher than other professional jobs. Some people think

this

is unreasonable while others agree with it. In the following paragraph, a reason to support my opinion will be discussed. Nowadays, many people have known about famous

sports

in the

world

such

as football, basketball, tennis and others the rest of

sports

. So these

sports

have made an ordinary person

to

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be a superstar,

for instance

, Ronaldo and Messi who are

the

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successful

sports

professionals, which someone calls them with G.O.A.T that it is mean the greatest of all times.

Moreover

, not only footballers have earned a

lot

of

money

but

also

basketball similar

revenue

highly

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for example

Lebron Jame who is the most famous basketball player in

this

time.

In addition

, the

revenue

of athletes is received from many ways which are supporter

such

as a

sports

partner, advertising and a salary

thus

they have a

lot

of

money

.

However

, it is not only the job in

sports

which earn a great deal of

money

but

also

other professions can earn

money

more than them. Many people do not know about the top ten richest in the

world

which have not the athletes in the ranking.

Additionally

, they only have a business owner and investor in the top ten ranking of the

world

richest

such

as Elon Musk (the richest in the

world

) and Warren Buffet (the legend of stock) In conclusion, not only the successful

sports

professionals can earn a

lot

of

revenue

but

also

the other professions can do the same. In my opinion, every job can make a high salary or a

lot

of

money

which it is depended on their skills of them as to how they will do for wealth.