Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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from successfully
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-class athletes is higher than other professional jobs. Some people think
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is unreasonable while others agree with it. In the following paragraph, a reason to support my opinion will be discussed. Nowadays, many people have known about famous
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in the
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as football, basketball, tennis and others the rest of
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. So these
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have made an ordinary person
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be a superstar,
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, Ronaldo and Messi who are
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successful
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professionals, which someone calls them with G.O.A.T that it is mean the greatest of all times.
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, not only footballers have earned a
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of
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but
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basketball similar
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highly
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Lebron Jame who is the most famous basketball player in
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time.
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, the
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of athletes is received from many ways which are supporter
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as a
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partner, advertising and a salary
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they have a
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of
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.
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, it is not only the job in
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which earn a great deal of
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but
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other professions can earn
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more than them. Many people do not know about the top ten richest in the
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which have not the athletes in the ranking.
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, they only have a business owner and investor in the top ten ranking of the
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richest
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as Elon Musk (the richest in the
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) and Warren Buffet (the legend of stock) In conclusion, not only the successful
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professionals can earn a
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of
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but
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the other professions can do the same. In my opinion, every job can make a high salary or a
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of
money
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which it is depended on their skills of them as to how they will do for wealth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial remuneration
  • exceptional
  • merit
  • talent
  • demand
  • entertainment value
  • career span
  • physical demands
  • justified
  • unfair
  • criticism
  • income inequality
  • societal priorities
  • sportsmanship
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