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Band 3.5

Summerise the information and selecting and reporting.

The bar chart describes the information about the
energy
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 produced from various resources in a nation between 1985 and 2003, units are measured in percentages. Overall, oil
energy
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 source was the highest in the given two periods and hydro
energy
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 was the same amount in these both years. According to the graph illustrates, in 1985, oil
energy
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 was the highest, with an average of just above half, but in 2003, oil
energy
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 was reduced significantly, which is just below two fifths.
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, nuclear was the highest amount of
energy
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 sources in 1985, with an average of 22 per cent, but eighteen years later,
this
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 proportion was reduced dramatically, which is 8%. In terms of natural gas had 13%, but in 2003,
this
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 figure was increased by 10%.
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, coal
energy
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 was just 8%, in 1985, but eighteen years later,
this
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 proportion grew significantly, with an average of 22 per cent. Hydro
energy
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 sources had the same amount of proportion in these both periods. which is 4%.
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 renewable was 1% in 1985, but in 2003, there was a slight increase, which is 4%.

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