Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Individuals may believe that designers of development in big cities should be controlled by governments. On another hand, some societies may believe that those who pay for the development of the building should choose the designer. In my point of ,view the government should be controlled how the structure looks.  Some communities may think that the government must dominate what some areas should look like
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because that can impact the tourist and
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the economy of the city;
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, some cities attract a lot of tourists because of the features of the city, if someone decides to construct one land with different designs, that can affect the designer of the areas;
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can lead motivate other community to take the initiative and do the same, so the place will gradually change and maybe will not be as interesting was before for foreigners.  Some society believes that who finance the project should decide how the development look. It is expensive to build and create a new house, so how to pay for the structure should have domination over how your project will appear.
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, nations demand different designers, so some companies decide to build different houses and sell for those populations,
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can be important to grow the economy of one place. Some nations think that government should dominate the appearance of one place, but some believe that those who finance the project must be in charge of the feature of their home. Change completely the appearance of the city can decrease the interest of tourists to visit some areas,
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community, in general, have different tastes and some times wants different designers.
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