Study shows that many criminals have low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so they could get a good job once they are released. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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rate is growing day by day and in order to reduce it , some people suggest creating facilities for inmates similar to those in higher education, which could help them to develop, the necessary skills to apply for a job after being cancelled from

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. I agree that the government should introduce special arrangements;

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, they should not be treated for all as one. Indeed, giving education to inmates can be beneficial for the economy of the country.

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former criminals would have a chance to work legally, as the result,they would have a steady job as well as pay monthly taxes.

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of having strict rules and disrespecting values, authorities created alternatives to work with criminals. They put them into rehabilitation courses, where they broaden their horizons, study subjects and most importantly build self-confidence. In other ,words they help them to avoid reoffending

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a system would teach them to live away from illegality.

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, most incarcerated serve different sentences, meaning that the level of violence they have committed is

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, some have a big criminal record, including acts of terrorism or a dozen murders , while others are in

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by chance or petty

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. So , offering opportunities to get higher education to everyone in

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, would bring more dangerous consequences, as hardened criminals often tend to re-offend

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by being unwilling to be employed. In conclusion,

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I agree that offenders should have chances to study while they are in

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, I believe that their background experience should

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

280 words

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Study shows that many criminals have low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so they could get a good job once they are released. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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