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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometime starting until the age of five or six, right up until the age of eighteen. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making childern do exams?

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It is true that
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 have a lot of
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 and quizzes in their schools when they are young. Some people believe making children do
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 in their school is good for their education. In my view, I think
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 might struggle with some issues with
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 situation. On the one hand, the main purpose of
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 is checking
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' educational achievements because even if they take school program, the community do not know about their level of understanding.
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, teachers and educators can appreciate
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' abilities and they can provide feedback or extra classes to improve their educational achievement.
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, most schools provide retake
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 to
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 who failed in the
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 to
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' basic knowledge.
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, to check the
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' study, people have to make an effort
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 as interviews or projects.
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, those ways spend too much time and the results are subjective.
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, people can evaluate
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 through
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 in a short time.
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, the
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 might have problems with taking tests.
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 with, to take
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,
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 have to study a lot to prepare,
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, they will be under pressure. It is true that extreme stress is harmful to children.
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, in Korea, some
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 commit suicide because of their studies.
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, it is not right to decide the
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' education level in a test because each student had a different effort in their
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.
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, if the
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’ grades are decided by
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, most
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 will focus on tests, not their
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. In conclusion,
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 teachers and society can check and evaluate their children's educational abilities, I believe
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 are not a good method to consider a student's education level and their efforts.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • assessment
  • systematic
  • evaluate
  • mastery
  • subject matter
  • preparation
  • academic
  • professional
  • frequent
  • disipline
  • time management
  • learning gaps
  • stress
  • anxiety
  • mental health
  • memorization
  • creativity
  • socio-economic
  • disparities
  • disadvantaged
  • resources
  • inequality
  • intrinsic motivation
  • joyful pursuit
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