The pie charts below show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in scotland for 20 years ago and last year.
The
above highlighted
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above-highlighted
pie
charts
describes
the percentage of Change the verb form
describe
Electricity
produced in Scotland
. The two
different pie
charts
exhibits
the Change the verb form
exhibit
amount
of electricity
produced by using seven different kind
of Change to a plural noun
kinds
energy
source
in the past 2 decades and last
year
in Scotland
.
As per the pie
Charts
shows Coal had generated the highest electricity
with the amount
of 41.4 % energy
for the past 20 years. Gas was the Change preposition
of energy
second
main source
of energy
with average electric production of 22.3 % which is 19.1 % lesser than Coal. Nuclear was considered as
the Change preposition
apply
third
main source
of energy
to produce electricity
with the
total Correct article usage
a
amount
of 19.6 % of energy
. The remaining other kind
of Change the wording
another kind
other kinds
energy
sources
was able to be produce
less than 10 % of Change the verb form
produce
Electricity
,where oil
was marked as the lowest capability to generate electricity
with average
of 2.1 % in the past Add an article
an average
two
decades.
The record also
proved that the
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apply
Scotland
had used the same source
of energy
in order to produce Electricity
past
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the past
year
. Comparing
to the other kind of Wrong verb form
Compared
sources
, Coal had
generated the highest Unnecessary verb
apply
amount
of electricity
with highest
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the highest
amount
32.7
% of Change preposition
of 32.7
energy
in the last
year
. Then
, Nuclear had
generated 26.4 % of Unnecessary verb
apply
energy
and the third
highest source
was Gas with total
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the total
a total
amount
of 21.7 %. The other sources
didn’t generate much electricity
. The minimum of electricity
generated was by Oil
with total
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the total
a total
amount
of 4.0% of energy
is
the past Correct your spelling
in
year
.
In Conclusion, the above two
pie
charts
gave brief
explanation that Add an article
a brief
the brief
Scotland
had
used the same Unnecessary verb
apply
sources
of energy
and the energy
produced was almost the same for the past years. Among all the different sources
, Coal was the highest and Oil
was the lowest in producing energy
for generating electricity
. Moreover
, the
other Correct article usage
apply
source
of energy
such
as Nuclear, Other renewables and oil
had increased its
production in the Correct pronoun usage
their
last
year
. Some of the Source
of Fix the agreement mistake
Sources
energy
had
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
its
productivity Correct pronoun usage
their
last
year
compared to the last
two
decades.Submitted by Habuna3016
on
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