The pie charts below show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in scotland for 20 years ago and last year.

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the percentage of

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produced in

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the

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produced by using seven different

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of

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in the past 2 decades and

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in

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shows Coal had generated the highest

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with the

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of 41.4 %

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for the past 20 years. Gas was the

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main

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with average electric production of 22.3 % which is 19.1 % lesser than Coal. Nuclear was considered

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to produce

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total

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of 19.6 % of

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less than 10 % of

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,where

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was marked as the lowest capability to generate

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with

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of 2.1 % in the past

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decades. The record

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Scotland

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had used the same

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in order to produce

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to the other kind of

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, Coal

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generated the highest

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of

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generated 26.4 % of

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and the

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was Gas with

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of 21.7 %. The other

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didn’t generate much

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. The minimum of

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generated was by

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of 4.0% of

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explanation that

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used the same

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of

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and the

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produced was almost the same for the past years. Among all the different

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, Coal was the highest and

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was the lowest in producing

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for generating

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.

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other

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as Nuclear, Other renewables and

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had increased

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production in the

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of

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productivity

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compared to the

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decades.