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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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As technology advances in the modern era, so is the sprouting of popular online apps, that generate millions of users , in which each individual identity
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 taken. There must be some benefits and drawbacks to
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 but I believe the disadvantages outweigh the precedence. For tech giants,
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 vast amount of customer statistics and
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collaborating with government agencies, the data shared can lead to invaluable discoveries boosting innovation and solving humanitarian problems.
For instance
, a telecommunication company in Colombia shares call input with
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 Nations Food and Agriculture Organization to measure the movements of people
due to
 climate change.
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, with the shared information online, everyone is traceable. It may sound horrendous but to some extent, it is safer. Criminals can easily be tracked and
further
 attacks can be prevented. In 2008, police in the United States
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 able to arrest 72 gang members, by pulling out
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 vast amount of information from Facebook.
On the other hand
, the internet world could be dangerous if
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online companies,especially the smaller ones, don't know how to protect themselves.Unsecured websites can compromise the identities of their users.
First,
someone's personal info can be accessed by computer hackers .
This
 may result in stolen credit card information or files getting attacked by viruses and worms.
In addition
, spammers lurk around the internet looking for potential prey, by sending unsolicited emails and messages. Spam mails can
then
 direct the recipient to phishing websites or sites that download malware to the victim's computer. In conclusion,
although
, personal statistics kept by internet companies may lead to several benefits to individuals and society, it may
also
 come with a price. Having individual privacy compromised has much more negative impacts and could endanger the lives of people.
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